Body and Soul
Standing by the window
I feel your closeness uncovered
looking back my eye catches a sunbeam
touching your unwrapped muscular body…
my soul surfing the lines
of your thoughts…
orbiting the aura that precedes
my imagination;
reaching and bursting through
the crust, entering my heart and
suddenly…I turned and the desire to meet
is far beyond my understanding.
~~~Nikita
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Please feel free to leave any comments…positive/negative…! This is one of my very own!
I think it’s quite nice, and quite erotic as well. 🙂 Of course, it can’t be about me because I don’t have a muscular body, LOL!
Ah !!! yes imagination !! how powerful it can be !!
Hi Tony… nice to have you around!!
Hi Dan… what about a visit to the gym!! 🙂
Nikita…ek is verras! Pragtige woorde wat jy so mooi saamvleg!
NS: O-ja, ek dink ook dis eroties.
Ewenwel, ‘n baie geseende Kersfees vir jou en kie. 8)
Simply beautiful! I want to shout: more! more! But if you have/can write more like this you should be able to publish it in print – you could give Rod McKuen a go.
Hi Kop…Thanks for your comments!! You’re surely not very serious!…LOL!
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Hi, this poem is very good and you should copy it and put it on your new site – Poetry in Motion. 🙂
🙂 Hi greathoneybear…tks I will …
Baie, baie mooi gedig! Dit voel of hierdie gedig vir my geskryf is!! Selfs die foto is mooi verby!
hi Wipneus! Ek’s bly jy het hom ook geniet! Ek is maar bietjie lui as dit by die Engels kom, lees dit graag.